TT: Writing Exercise
Written By: Jane E. on May 12, 2009
7 Comments
Hi everybody! It’s time for another writing exercise. Based on the photo below, please post, in two hundred words or less, a story, song, or poem in comments. Or you can leave a link to where you have it posted and we’ll come check it out. I look forward to seeing what you write!

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Two hundred words kills me some days
I got awful close to it this time though. 
http://onthewrongsideofthemirror.wordpress.com/2009/05/13/dark-queen/
Thanks, KJ! I’m off to check out your entry. Two hundred words is quite a challenge, I know! Thanks for participating
Hope all are doing great
somehow this is what came to my mine
In Every Human Tongue
Do I have to be a woman to understand what a woman understands?
Is there some way I can give birth to that side of me that touches as a woman touches?
Or is it all a matter of seeing or working that part of the brain that merges with the soul.
Would the shock and instant pain release pleasure of giving up my virginity
Even if only in my mind
Would that posses me of a heart that knows a lose so great nothing can bring it back.
Must I know the monthly pain and terror that brings forth life itself,
The washing out of old life that did not bear fruit, in itself a lose.
Am I so different nothing in my life, even if complete, can tap that place
Where no matter what the pain we bond so completely the feeling is all mystery.
A mystery we have giving a thousand names, in every human tongue.
Donald Rhodes
even the mine does not work as well as the mind and both are lost
Donald Rhodes
Ah, Donald
I can tell I’m going to very much enjoy seeing more of you at TL! Lost mine or not, haha:)
Your writing is lovely, and full of meaning.
“Or is it all a matter of seeing or working that part of the brain that merges with the soul”
“Where no matter what the pain we bond so completely the feeling is all mystery.”
Love it!
Thanks so much for participating, Donald
Sorry, everyone. More dark, morbid ramblings. I might as well accept that maybe these are the stories I’m meant to write.
http://fragmentsofanimagination.wordpress.com/2009/05/19/imprisoned/
Hi Pamela:) I almost missed your comment! Off to read now…thanks for participating!