Comments on: TT: Writing Exercise http://www.textyladies.com/2009/05/12/tt-writing-exercise-6/ Artful adventures in writing Fri, 23 Jul 2010 19:38:12 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Jane E. http://www.textyladies.com/2009/05/12/tt-writing-exercise-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2513 Jane E. Tue, 19 May 2009 16:19:25 +0000 http://www.textyladies.com/?p=378#comment-2513 Hi Pamela:) I almost missed your comment! Off to read now...thanks for participating! Hi Pamela:) I almost missed your comment! Off to read now…thanks for participating!

]]> By: Pamela L. http://www.textyladies.com/2009/05/12/tt-writing-exercise-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2510 Pamela L. Tue, 19 May 2009 01:56:32 +0000 http://www.textyladies.com/?p=378#comment-2510 Sorry, everyone. More dark, morbid ramblings. I might as well accept that maybe these are the stories I'm meant to write. :-) http://fragmentsofanimagination.wordpress.com/2009/05/19/imprisoned/ Sorry, everyone. More dark, morbid ramblings. I might as well accept that maybe these are the stories I’m meant to write. :-)

http://fragmentsofanimagination.wordpress.com/2009/05/19/imprisoned/

]]> By: Feel The Fantasy… » Blog Archive » Today… http://www.textyladies.com/2009/05/12/tt-writing-exercise-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2475 Feel The Fantasy… » Blog Archive » Today… Wed, 13 May 2009 17:36:30 +0000 http://www.textyladies.com/?p=378#comment-2475 [...] My writing exercise post is up at Textyladies. If you’d like to participate, I’d love to have you. Come on over! [...] [...] My writing exercise post is up at Textyladies. If you’d like to participate, I’d love to have you. Come on over! [...]

]]> By: Jane E. Jones http://www.textyladies.com/2009/05/12/tt-writing-exercise-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2474 Jane E. Jones Wed, 13 May 2009 17:34:35 +0000 http://www.textyladies.com/?p=378#comment-2474 Ah, Donald :) I can tell I'm going to very much enjoy seeing more of you at TL! Lost mine or not, haha:) Your writing is lovely, and full of meaning. "Or is it all a matter of seeing or working that part of the brain that merges with the soul" "Where no matter what the pain we bond so completely the feeling is all mystery." Love it! Thanks so much for participating, Donald :) Ah, Donald :)
I can tell I’m going to very much enjoy seeing more of you at TL! Lost mine or not, haha:)
Your writing is lovely, and full of meaning.

“Or is it all a matter of seeing or working that part of the brain that merges with the soul”

“Where no matter what the pain we bond so completely the feeling is all mystery.”

Love it!

Thanks so much for participating, Donald :)

]]> By: Donald Rhodes http://www.textyladies.com/2009/05/12/tt-writing-exercise-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2473 Donald Rhodes Wed, 13 May 2009 17:10:40 +0000 http://www.textyladies.com/?p=378#comment-2473 even the mine does not work as well as the mind and both are lost :) Donald Rhodes even the mine does not work as well as the mind and both are lost :)

Donald Rhodes

]]> By: Donald Rhodes http://www.textyladies.com/2009/05/12/tt-writing-exercise-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2472 Donald Rhodes Wed, 13 May 2009 16:52:22 +0000 http://www.textyladies.com/?p=378#comment-2472 Hope all are doing great :) somehow this is what came to my mine :) In Every Human Tongue Do I have to be a woman to understand what a woman understands? Is there some way I can give birth to that side of me that touches as a woman touches? Or is it all a matter of seeing or working that part of the brain that merges with the soul. Would the shock and instant pain release pleasure of giving up my virginity Even if only in my mind Would that posses me of a heart that knows a lose so great nothing can bring it back. Must I know the monthly pain and terror that brings forth life itself, The washing out of old life that did not bear fruit, in itself a lose. Am I so different nothing in my life, even if complete, can tap that place Where no matter what the pain we bond so completely the feeling is all mystery. A mystery we have giving a thousand names, in every human tongue. Donald Rhodes Hope all are doing great :) somehow this is what came to my mine :)

In Every Human Tongue

Do I have to be a woman to understand what a woman understands?
Is there some way I can give birth to that side of me that touches as a woman touches?
Or is it all a matter of seeing or working that part of the brain that merges with the soul.
Would the shock and instant pain release pleasure of giving up my virginity
Even if only in my mind
Would that posses me of a heart that knows a lose so great nothing can bring it back.
Must I know the monthly pain and terror that brings forth life itself,
The washing out of old life that did not bear fruit, in itself a lose.
Am I so different nothing in my life, even if complete, can tap that place
Where no matter what the pain we bond so completely the feeling is all mystery.
A mystery we have giving a thousand names, in every human tongue.

Donald Rhodes

]]> By: Jane E. Jones http://www.textyladies.com/2009/05/12/tt-writing-exercise-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2469 Jane E. Jones Wed, 13 May 2009 16:33:32 +0000 http://www.textyladies.com/?p=378#comment-2469 Thanks, KJ! I'm off to check out your entry. Two hundred words is quite a challenge, I know! Thanks for participating :) Thanks, KJ! I’m off to check out your entry. Two hundred words is quite a challenge, I know! Thanks for participating :)

]]> By: KnittingJourneyman http://www.textyladies.com/2009/05/12/tt-writing-exercise-6/comment-page-1/#comment-2468 KnittingJourneyman Wed, 13 May 2009 14:45:03 +0000 http://www.textyladies.com/?p=378#comment-2468 Two hundred words kills me some days :-) I got awful close to it this time though. :-) http://onthewrongsideofthemirror.wordpress.com/2009/05/13/dark-queen/ Two hundred words kills me some days :-) I got awful close to it this time though. :-)
http://onthewrongsideofthemirror.wordpress.com/2009/05/13/dark-queen/

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